So freaking amazing.
My new favorite flash. You are so talented / amazing...and I love Mustard <3 Ketchup. All of my thumbs are up on this one.
Keep it up. You know you're good. Looking forward to your next BIG project (after Converse) :)
Keep on animating!
First drawn flash? Eh...
Going a little easy because, it IS your first real flash. It was significantly better than most animation that comes through the portal, meaning that I could tell you put a signifcant amount of effort into it. However, the fight scenes were rather slow and the plot was just weak in general. Make your animation smoother and the plot better...and whatever you recorded the voices on sucked; it was really scratchy.
Btw, Omega_strain's review cracks me up..."this is a pretty decent score coming from me"...it's his first review!! XD
Even better than the first one. If you've got ideas, don't hesitate to use these characters again!
I looked over the first few reviews, and everyone loved it. I hat to say it, but I cannot, for the life of me, say why. The premise was dumb: "Have you ever wondered what it's like for a flash to go through the portal?" Well, actually...no, I haven't. I didn't see much humor, great graphics, or any storyline. Try again, but make it better.
come on man
Does not deserve to be blue in the portal. Some of it was funny, but it was just bad. The joke at the end (don't want to say what it is in case I ruin someone's view) was just stupid and waaaay overused. Try again, cause this one wasn't thrilling.
You managed to make a Beatles song into a well-animated and highly amusing flash. Major props to you...and, I love the Beatles. Great job!
Better than the first, I'll certainly give you that. However, I thought you made some really bad choices--mainly the use of the Sims music, at least twice. Again, it was a bit slow moving, but I'd say the animation was a bit better and the humor was more in the jokes than the use of foul language. Doesn't deserve to be rated as well as it is, but it's not a bad flash.
I really thought it would be better. It was long, there was tons of unneccessary cursing, and got boring. Some of it was funny, but...ehh. Just alright. I hope #2 is better.
Actually really funny and pertinent to me (as I'm in high school). Lots of things that made me laugh, such as the music with "The Adventures of Chad the Inkblot." It's an overused tune, but you knew how to use it exactly. The animation, on the other hand, was pretty lackluster. Summary: story good, drawing/animation, bad. Work on the animation and you'll have yourself a nice piece o' flash. (Oh, and work on your grammar.)
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