TwilightZ0ne00's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Newgrounds System]

Ehh...

I looked over the first few reviews, and everyone loved it. I hat to say it, but I cannot, for the life of me, say why. The premise was dumb: "Have you ever wondered what it's like for a flash to go through the portal?" Well, actually...no, I haven't. I didn't see much humor, great graphics, or any storyline. Try again, but make it better.

ToonCastleTV responds:

come on man

[Star Wars: Coming Soon]

Hm.

I really don't know what to think of this--as it is your first flash. Obviously you need to develop your own style, but if you work on your skills, I think some of your future flash will turn out nicely. The biggest problem with this one were that it looked like you got somewhat lazy in some parts, such as the lip synching, arm movements, and when the two ships collided. Not too bad for your first, though.

silentmike86 responds:

Yeah I couldn't get the ships crashing to look how I wanted it, and I must admit I’m not keen on how it looks. For the main one I will do better mouths, with teeth and stuff, and I will make sure there will be no rubbish explosions ether. Thanks for the review